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*It may be a little confusing, because many of the projects were carried out as Oton Zupančič Library, before the consolidation. Does that need to be explained better? | *It may be a little confusing, because many of the projects were carried out as Oton Zupančič Library, before the consolidation. Does that need to be explained better? | ||
*Two of the project websites didn't work: [http://www.tune.eu http://www.tune.eu] and [http_//www.pulls.dk www.pulls.dk], so not included. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] 23:42, 10 March 2010 (CET) | *Two of the project websites didn't work: [http://www.tune.eu http://www.tune.eu] and [http_//www.pulls.dk www.pulls.dk], so not included. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] 23:42, 10 March 2010 (CET) | ||
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| + | It [[Established::2008]], the [[Oton Župančič Library]] joined forces with the [[Bežigrad Library]], [[Slovanska Library]], [[Prežihov Voranc Library]], [[Šiška Library]] and [[Jože Mazovec Library]] to become the biggest public library in Slovenia, now known as the [[Municipal Library of Ljubljana]]. | ||
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| + | (also eliminates the problem in pt. 2 above) | ||
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| + | --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] 23:46, 10 March 2010 (CET) | ||
Revision as of 23:46, 10 March 2010
Comments from Language Editor
- tried to make it a little more juicy by putting in some pertinent info!!!
- It may be a little confusing, because many of the projects were carried out as Oton Zupančič Library, before the consolidation. Does that need to be explained better?
- Two of the project websites didn't work: http://www.tune.eu and [http_//www.pulls.dk www.pulls.dk], so not included. --Jana Wilcoxen 23:42, 10 March 2010 (CET)
- perhaps a better teaser:
It 2008, the Oton Župančič Library joined forces with the Bežigrad Library, Slovanska Library, Prežihov Voranc Library, Šiška Library and Jože Mazovec Library to become the biggest public library in Slovenia, now known as the Municipal Library of Ljubljana.
(also eliminates the problem in pt. 2 above)
--Jana Wilcoxen 23:46, 10 March 2010 (CET)
