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* Anže, I've made some changes in the article. Let me know if it still works for you content-wise. I've changed in particular, the part about "the band continued sliding farther down the slopes" ... for me it seemed a bit of a criticism or judgement about jazz and improvised music. Wasn't sure if you meant it that way, but in any case, it seemed unnecessary here in the article. ;) I tried to keep your colour analogy by linking it to the shades on the slopes ... what do you think? Vid will be playing on Sound Explicit in September, perhaps you could also mention that in the article. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] ([[User talk:Jwilcoxen|talk]]) 14:34, 26 August 2013 (CEST) | * Anže, I've made some changes in the article. Let me know if it still works for you content-wise. I've changed in particular, the part about "the band continued sliding farther down the slopes" ... for me it seemed a bit of a criticism or judgement about jazz and improvised music. Wasn't sure if you meant it that way, but in any case, it seemed unnecessary here in the article. ;) I tried to keep your colour analogy by linking it to the shades on the slopes ... what do you think? Vid will be playing on Sound Explicit in September, perhaps you could also mention that in the article. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] ([[User talk:Jwilcoxen|talk]]) 14:34, 26 August 2013 (CEST) | ||
: Aha, on that note, I just read it again and saw that the title was called Descent and that is probably why you chose that description ... still ... let me know if the current changes can work. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] ([[User talk:Jwilcoxen|talk]]) 14:36, 26 August 2013 (CEST) | : Aha, on that note, I just read it again and saw that the title was called Descent and that is probably why you chose that description ... still ... let me know if the current changes can work. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] ([[User talk:Jwilcoxen|talk]]) 14:36, 26 August 2013 (CEST) | ||
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| + | * It was neither criticism nor judgement, and it was also not an an intentional correspondence to the "sliding down..." part. It was just a very neutral (if rather metaphorical) description of their musical direction changing and it is funny that there probably really was a sort of an unaware reference to "descent". However, the new version is perfectly ok with me. | ||
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| + | As for the sound explicit thingy, I think this somehow already encompassed it "hey have also been a very noticeable presence in the local free improvisation scene and as such played in a number of ad hoc collectives." | ||
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| + | --[[User:Anže Zorman|Anže Zorman]] ([[User talk:Anže Zorman|talk]]) 11:58, 27 August 2013 (CEST) | ||
Latest revision as of 16:01, 29 December 2020
- I'd kindly ask for the following articles to be created and delegated to me.
Orkester brez meja, Drašler / Karlovčec / Drašler, Brencl Banda, Malik, Črni Peter
--Anže Zorman (talk) 18:43, 14 August 2013 (CEST)
- Anže, I've made some changes in the article. Let me know if it still works for you content-wise. I've changed in particular, the part about "the band continued sliding farther down the slopes" ... for me it seemed a bit of a criticism or judgement about jazz and improvised music. Wasn't sure if you meant it that way, but in any case, it seemed unnecessary here in the article. ;) I tried to keep your colour analogy by linking it to the shades on the slopes ... what do you think? Vid will be playing on Sound Explicit in September, perhaps you could also mention that in the article. --Jana Wilcoxen (talk) 14:34, 26 August 2013 (CEST)
- Aha, on that note, I just read it again and saw that the title was called Descent and that is probably why you chose that description ... still ... let me know if the current changes can work. --Jana Wilcoxen (talk) 14:36, 26 August 2013 (CEST)
- It was neither criticism nor judgement, and it was also not an an intentional correspondence to the "sliding down..." part. It was just a very neutral (if rather metaphorical) description of their musical direction changing and it is funny that there probably really was a sort of an unaware reference to "descent". However, the new version is perfectly ok with me.
As for the sound explicit thingy, I think this somehow already encompassed it "hey have also been a very noticeable presence in the local free improvisation scene and as such played in a number of ad hoc collectives."
--Anže Zorman (talk) 11:58, 27 August 2013 (CEST)
