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| + | * Anže, I've made some changes in the article. Let me know if it still works for you content-wise. | ||
| + | I've changed in particular, the part about "the band continued sliding farther down the slopes" ... for me it seemed a bit of a criticism or judgement about jazz and improvised music. Wasn't sure if you meant it that way, but in any case, it seemed unnecessary here in the article. ;) I tried to keep your colour analogy by linking it to the shades on the slopes ... what do you think? Vid will be playing on Sound Explicit in September, perhaps you could also mention that in the article. --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] ([[User talk:Jwilcoxen|talk]]) 14:34, 26 August 2013 (CEST) | ||
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- I'd kindly ask for the following articles to be created and delegated to me.
Orkester brez meja, Drašler / Karlovčec / Drašler, Brencl Banda, Malik, Črni Peter
--Anže Zorman (talk) 18:43, 14 August 2013 (CEST)
- Anže, I've made some changes in the article. Let me know if it still works for you content-wise.
I've changed in particular, the part about "the band continued sliding farther down the slopes" ... for me it seemed a bit of a criticism or judgement about jazz and improvised music. Wasn't sure if you meant it that way, but in any case, it seemed unnecessary here in the article. ;) I tried to keep your colour analogy by linking it to the shades on the slopes ... what do you think? Vid will be playing on Sound Explicit in September, perhaps you could also mention that in the article. --Jana Wilcoxen (talk) 14:34, 26 August 2013 (CEST)
