Baraga Homestead

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Revision as of 12:25, 14 May 2010 by Jwilcoxen (talk | contribs) (Comments from Language Editor)
  • preveri: The collection is managed by the Archbishop's Ordinariate in Ljubljana. Admin 09:59, 22 January 2010 (UTC)


language editor comments

  • Alenka, I got a bit confused about the use of Collection in the text and Homestead in the title and yet a clear relationship between the two not really clearly established. Perhaps its a result of the redirect, as it looks like it was originally written for Baraga Collection. I didn't catch it earlier ... Regardless, perhaps it's worth changing the first sentence a bit, more like: The Baraga Homestead houses the Baraga Collection ... but also then the rest of the sentence needs a bit of massaging ... what do you think? Aja, I will also change the link to Baraga Collection at SEM article.
  • Is it worth mentioning the unfinished Baraga Seminary and Plečnik?

--Jana Wilcoxen 13:25, 14 May 2010 (CEST)