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+ | * I added some details about the designer and the awards, as well as 20th anniversary. | ||
+ | * Add'l External links also added. Seemed to me the general link to the Adria press centre is useful because logos and photos are available there. | ||
+ | * I'm not sure why we have [[LUKSstudio]] written without a space in the article title. On their website, they seem to use a space. Will mention this question also on the talk page for the article. | ||
+ | * My opinion is that this magazine is really a gem amongst airline magazines. I would like to find a way that this article expresses just how special it is. You know, as in, every passenger who rides Adria Airlines has the opportunity to meet an incredible publication that reveals inspiring information about Slovenia before they've even set foot in the country. Like I said, MHO. ;) | ||
+ | --[[User:Jwilcoxen|Jana Wilcoxen]] 11:29, 10 June 2010 (CEST) |
Revision as of 10:29, 10 June 2010
- TO ADD - some selected topics are available in PDF format --Editor 17:05, 8 June 2010 (CEST)
- http://www.dnevnik.si/novice/kultura/1042214792
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Comments from Language Editor
- I added some details about the designer and the awards, as well as 20th anniversary.
- Add'l External links also added. Seemed to me the general link to the Adria press centre is useful because logos and photos are available there.
- I'm not sure why we have LUKSstudio written without a space in the article title. On their website, they seem to use a space. Will mention this question also on the talk page for the article.
- My opinion is that this magazine is really a gem amongst airline magazines. I would like to find a way that this article expresses just how special it is. You know, as in, every passenger who rides Adria Airlines has the opportunity to meet an incredible publication that reveals inspiring information about Slovenia before they've even set foot in the country. Like I said, MHO. ;)
--Jana Wilcoxen 11:29, 10 June 2010 (CEST)